Despite the tabby rogue who fought Lightning Tail and Leaf being a she-cat, she is mentioned as a tom a few pages later.
Slate is mistakenly described with only one missing eartip.
Despite appearing in the book, Bee, Beech, Splinter, Ember, Moss Tail, Pine Needle, Drizzle, Raven Pelt, Juniper Branch, Red Claw, Violet Dawn, Frog, Willow Tail, and Dawn Mist aren't listed in the allegiances.
River Ripple is mistakenly called River Rippled.
Sparrow Fur is said to have amber eyes.
Star Flower is said to have amber eyes.
Moon Shadow is said to have died on the journey from the mountains, when he died from a fire later.
Despite Jagged Peak being the one who is supposed to be giving Eagle Feather a badger ride, the kit is seen with Mouse Ear, with his siblings climbing on older cats, instead of Jagged Peak being the one giving the ride.
On at least two occasions, Clear Sky is said to have killed Rainswept Flower before the battle began.
Lightning Tail and Acorn Fur are mistakenly listed as kits in the allegiances.
In the allegiances, Morning Whisker, Moth Flight, and Dust Muzzle are mistakenly listed under Clear Sky's camp.
In the allegiances, Mouse Ear is listed as "Mouse Ears".
Falling Feather is listed in the allegiances, despite dying in The First Battle.
Owl Eyes is mistakingly called Owl Eye.
Pebble Heart is mistakenly called Pebble Eyes.
Fircone is mistakenly called mottled gray.
Acorn Fur is mistakenly called Acorn Leaf.
Thorn is also mistakenly referred to as a brown tom.
Thorn and Dew's descriptions and genders are swapped with one another (Thorn being a tom, and Dew a she-cat) in The First Battle, despite being correctly listed in the allegiances.
Fircone is said to be mottled brown-and-white.
Lightning Tail and Acorn Fur are listed as kits in the allegiances, despite being old enough to participate in the battle at Fourtrees.
Moon Shadow and Misty are listed in the allegiances, despite both dying in Thunder Rising.
They're all around me, he thought hungrily." Unlike most other instances when a cat thinks, Ripple's thoughts aren't italicised. It reads, "Another followed, and another.
In the bonus scene, Ripple thinks about all the fish around him.
Lightning Tail is mistakenly called a she.
Leaf is mistakenly described as gray-and-white.
Shattered Ice is mistakenly described with silver fur.
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